August 25 - In search of impossible light (after Larissa Szporluk)
Music - Interlude VII from Fresh Aire IV by Mannheim Steamroller; The Impossible Dream from Stage Heroes by Colm Wilkinson
Striving
Hand outstretched
Grasping
Searching
Trying
Hoping
In vain
The struggle
To find it
To reach it
That impossible light
That unreachable star
That unreachable dream
What kind of crazy awesome name is Szporluk? Wow. I need a pseudonym that is half as awesome.
Day 25 - Failing Better
"No marks on paper can ever measure up to the word's music in the mind, to the purity of the image before its ambush by language." - Mary Gordon
"What we need to do is think of all our failed drafts simply as steps toward the final one, the one that works." - Barbara Abercrombie
You have no idea how many times I have bewailed and bemoaned the fact that we don't have telepathic abilities. Star Trek, you are cruel for introducing me to the idea/possibility. The images I see in my head and scenes I write have so much more depth and flavor and character and emotion than what I am capable of conveying on paper. Sometimes I can rewrite or edit in some of what I miss the first time but there comes a point where there are too many words and they begin to obscure the image I am trying to paint/clarify. See, right there. We don't have a word to convey the thought/feeling/emotion I am going for so I resort to slashes. Some day, my friends, I can only hope, some day we will have the ability to convey ourselves perfectly.
I was feeling like this was a little 'blah' so I am glad to be able to include pictures! And on an unrelated note, I think Barbara is a weird name. Bar Bar A
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