Sunday, September 9, 2012

Day 9 - Light on the water

August 9 - The way of light on water

Inlightened Ruffles
Inlit petals awash with pink blush 
Glides gently on molten wax
Crisp breeze caresses velvet ruffles
Bruised tips cradle
                            embers
                    dreams       glow
Inner contentment floats on viscous
                                             primordeal fear
Glazed
         in one rose
- Leandra Kafer (8. March .2006)

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Gently, gently it floated
Hovering
Not touching the cold water beneath
Pale and fuzzy, it could not bring itself to damp its life with this unhappy medium
Alone it wandered, wondered, searched for a companion, a someone, a friend
Searching across the water at last it found a beam of hope
"Come to me," it whispered,
     older, wiser, a lady
To the beam it flew,
     quickly as its form could fly
    to the voice that reached and faded
                             reached and faded
                             reached and faded
At last it reached its love
   Dodged bodies on the water
 And joined with its love
A stationary love
Whom it would leave
Older, wiser
To float again
Leaving with love and regrets
To find someone to share the water with again

The first poem I wrote years ago in my high school Creative Writing class based on the image you see.  When I read the prompt it was the first thing that came to mind so I had to copy it in before I began the new poem.
In the second poem I see this little, young, fuzzy, male ball of light floating above and wandering the dark ocean, searching for more of its kind and rather lonely.  Then it hears this siren voice calling across the water.  The voice is a lighthouse; older, more mature, female, maternal, and rather stuck in her ways (she is a lighthouse after all).  It dodges the boats on the water around her to fling itself into her light beam.  There they are very happy for a countless number of years until it begins to mature and realize that, despite their happy times, the lighthouse with it's stability and it with it's inherently playful and freewheeling ways don't share the same lifegoals.  So eventually the fuzzy light, now stronger, leaves to wander the waves again, again in search of someone to share life with. 

Day 9 - Getting Permission

Giver permissions to my students to write about themselves or whatever they please.

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